6/11/08
Today at 11.45 we went to the gym at our school we went there for the Health expo there were heaps tents and canapes with intersting things about the body the first thing that me and Tegan went to was the protein area were there was heaps of information about staying fit and healthy there we had to do a quiz and me Tegan and Daniel won a rist band after that we met up with Tayla and we went to the recycle tent is was very interesting we learnt how long it took for rubish to burn out when it is at the dump and it was WOW then we decided to go into the Positive Puberty tent it was very interesting we got a go-gurt and a jelly in a cup we learnt to stay clean while going through puberty we then went over to the well being area and me, Tayla, Elijah and Art
NOTE: not finished
2 comments:
hey Arnii, even though it's not finished it sounds really cool, you need to look at some of your sentences because it didn't really make sence. your spelling was GREAT and everything else it good. I hope you will work up to this
Samimanfa
Hey Arnica,
Even though its not quite finished I thought I should maybe point out to you that there are a couple of spelling mistakes. Maybe you were typing to fast but just go through your work and fix them. Thats nothing negative though!
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